Reviews: Desert Rose | FictionPress

1/8/2008 c1

322Basara
a beauty man can't seem to look beyond the image of lust and dependence...

nice...

1/8/2008 c1

216ygg
Such powerful words (especially the last line - even more so because it's only one word)! The second line says so much. Wonderful!

1/7/2008 c1

31Lurid Black
Wow that is really good, gives me a clear picture.

Keep writing.

~Lurid~

1/7/2008 c1

82Doxology
Wow. This is a really great haiku. Even ryhmes. :)

Peace & Love

~ h.p. warble

1/7/2008 c1

59Tranquil Thorns
Very pretty!

I like the second line especially - 'Carries beauty within strength'. It basically sums up a desert rose very neatly. =)

Nice, clean, and simple.