for steel god
1/8/2008 c1 
322Basaraa path which without a 'gut' wouldn't survive the least...
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1/8/2008 c1 216yggNontraditional to say the least. But it works! As an other reviewer mentioned, it's very audible, which is a rarely seen quality of good Haikus. The title fits perfectly. Great work!
1/7/2008 c1 tearing handsThe rhymes give the poem a really nice beat. I love the title. Good job!
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