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2/9/2008 c1 16Sanity's Oubliette
I like it. It is short, simple, and to the point - but still maintains the quality of a solid poem. It certainly, in a snapshot, captures that transition as part of growing up, and made me feel a little nostalgic. I like that you didn't try too hard and throw in a lot of obscure or complicated words or phrases.
1/7/2008 c1 115Random-Idiocity
The ending sums it all up. Good job on this. Keep it Up!
1/7/2008 c1 89Shadows in the Fire
Bravo. Well-presented.

-Shadow

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