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1/8/2008 c1 36Sita Fuoco
i love it. I love the repetition, it gets the points across well. :) Also, i love the lines, "cast aside and shunned by sight/you loved me but forgot that night" it's memorable because of the rythm you put into the rhyme. "ripped the veins out but kept the/heart." sounds so concrete, but is so abstract that it got me thinking that it's the perfect metaphor to what you are alluding to. I like it, and im glad to see your writing again :)
1/7/2008 c1 81Princess-anna57
Aww, expressive poem. Well done. Write on.

~Anna~
1/7/2008 c1 31Lurid Black
Like this, it's powerful, well writen, and shows a lot of emotion.

Keep writing.

~Lurid~

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