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5/24/2010 c1 eiyuang999
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3/8/2010 c1 1Hiwiwy
Honestly, I already had to laugh while reading the summary XD it promised a silly story :)

It's a really nice challenge, and I love what you did with it.

The ocean references are fantastic XDD those nicknames XD

("Quinne, in this pile, is your outfit."

I turned around.

"Julie, that pile is my entire closet."

"No, it's not. Now, start picking.")

I love that dialogue XD whenever I need an outfit, it starts like that XD

I think you missed typing one word though: (-high pitched squeaks resembling an excited.) - I'm putting quotes from the story between '()' to make it clearer :)

(I grabbed her purse and rushed to the door.)

did she take Julie's purse or her own?

("Hey, hun. How's the date going? Has he mad any moves yet?")

mad is supposed to be made, methinks

(I opened it and said, "Are you hear?")

hear = here

(-so I guess she'd my girlfriend now)

she'd = she's

idk if you like or dislike people pointing out typos, so is you dislike it, sorry XD ignore that part thenXD
7/20/2009 c1 10CassandraStacy
This is a totally cute one shot! Perfectly fluffy and all that jazz. I did notice that you switched from first person to third for a sentence when the MC was trying on her dress. But other than that, it was superb!

5/4/2009 c1 x3life
aww how cute =)
1/16/2009 c1 2CamilleBelle
This was gorgeous and I loved it.

Friggen Rick is a douche, flirting with other girls.

I love Matt, was a sweety!
7/9/2008 c1 5inkspatters
That was really cute. There were a few things in there that confused me for a while and I had to think before I got them, but unfortunately I can't remember any of them now (If I did I'd quote them for you). Matt sounds so awesome and Rick sounds like a loser.

Anyway, I really liked this, good job :D
1/11/2008 c1 9Lily Llynn
It's cute! Yay on completing the story (which is why I love writing oneshots. That feeling of completion is fantastic). This was pretty cute, and I'm psyched that someone else did my challenge. Hehehe. I think there's some parts that are kinda holey, but other than that, this was pretty well-written and very awesomely fluffy. (: I'm glad woodstock1969 added it to our c2!

*Oh and I love the whole fish/sea thing. Very funny. :D
1/9/2008 c1 Valiant
This was so cute! :D
1/9/2008 c1 1Uniquely Proud
Hi! Great story! funny too! :)
1/8/2008 c1 4vaudeville summers
Ah! Hilarious and adorablee Love the melodrama at the beginning.

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