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5/22/2009 c1 chocolateandbananas
wow.

that was great. i particularly loved the ending. i do that a lot to myself [rehearse lines and end up not saying what i practiced in the end, that is] so I really liked this.

It was left hanging, and though I totally want to know how the best friend feels, I think you ended it perfectly :)
5/16/2009 c1 the illiterate
Good ending.
3/25/2009 c1 8Veronica Kimble
oh wow. that was one of the best one shots ive ever read! keep up the good work with your writing :)
3/10/2009 c1 Closed Account Sorry Pal
I really must say, this is genius. Better then anything i ever wrote and definately better then i've ever seen in books
2/16/2009 c1 Mime
It's good. I usually hate story that left me hanging, but somehow her (i assumd that the speaker is a lady) rants are so vivid, that when she startd it took as simple as 'hi'. Um i still hate the left hanging part, i mean the point of reading a tale is about gve clarity. But thats another story lol.
2/16/2009 c1 Mime
It's good. I usually hate story that left me hanging, but somehow her (i assumd that the speaker is a lady) rants are so vivid, that when she startd it took as simple as 'hi'. Um i still hate the left hanging part, i mean the point of reading a tale is about gve clarity. But thats another story lol.
2/10/2009 c1 9Sally Can Wait
I loved this, and the way you ended it was perfect, even though I totally want to know what happens. :)

Sally
1/30/2009 c1 2beautiful.imperfection
I love your writing style!

And the way you just left me guessing at the end.. like, you left it up to us readers on how it really ends.

Wow, you're amazing!
1/2/2009 c1 9Jkgiggle
ugg. i want to hear more. i want the whole conversation. i know it doesn't fit with this glimse. i know that its not really about the conversation at all, or the outcome. But GRR! this is a really good peice of writing. I just finished up to where you've updated on Breaking Brian Deacon, and i must admit, i am addicted to your writing. thanx, and please, keep it up
12/21/2008 c1 19toffeecakesxox
Awesome. I love how she has imaginary conversations with herself/Michael, but she eventually ends up with simplest. And the "I love you"s made my heart wrench and my optimism to wish for an uderstanding best friend who loved her back. :)

GREATNESS!

-toffeecakesxox.
12/4/2008 c1 5HelloLovely
GAH! does he love her?
11/3/2008 c1 5Maria Gracia
You never seize to amaze me, wow...

This is honest...

The fears the anger that NEVER seems to come out in real words unless is either convenient or a mistake...

The sighs and deep breath we need to take and how our tummy feels... The tiny voice in the back of our mind...

This is real life put into words, and that happens to be the best kind of reading material...

MG
10/31/2008 c1 3Kcqueen13
AW haha. But seriously, this was adorable. I'm dying to know what he has to say (although I guess that's part of the mystery).
9/16/2008 c1 4anitsirK
That was cruel! Hahaha! I wanted to read more. :) Oh well. But it was a great one-shot, nonetheless.
9/3/2008 c1 26HaleyEmma
This is sweet. I really want to know what he says, though.
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