for Season of Stupid1/10/2008 c1 
27S. Ben Beach
smart. very witty, which is the polar opposite of what this poem's about, obviously. Loved the rhyming, it really packs a punch and three quarters. I guess the only thing I could suggest is perhaps expand on what these "outrageous" things people do that makes Winter (assuming that you live in the Northern Hemisphere - I live in the Southern Hemisphere, so it's Summer here) a season of stupidity. At the end of the day it's up to you to decide, but regardless, this is awesome, keep it up =)
27S. Ben Beachsmart. very witty, which is the polar opposite of what this poem's about, obviously. Loved the rhyming, it really packs a punch and three quarters. I guess the only thing I could suggest is perhaps expand on what these "outrageous" things people do that makes Winter (assuming that you live in the Northern Hemisphere - I live in the Southern Hemisphere, so it's Summer here) a season of stupidity. At the end of the day it's up to you to decide, but regardless, this is awesome, keep it up =)
1/10/2008 c1 31Lurid Black
Sweet, really well written, carefully chosen words that lead onto great rhymes.
'for 'stupid' is contagious'
Love it, keep writing!
~Lurid~
31Lurid BlackSweet, really well written, carefully chosen words that lead onto great rhymes.
'for 'stupid' is contagious'
Love it, keep writing!
~Lurid~