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12/15/2013 c1 Guest
This is an amazing peice of work. All I would like to say is you made some grammar mistakes and some words aren't so fitting in this. If you would like respond to this and ill give you my Email and we can work a bit on this together . There really isn't much to corect anyways, but this is such an amazing poem already you have an amazing way with words.
12/15/2013 c1 1achu12
5/8/2008 c1 6xEmoMuffinx
This was very meaningful!

You could see how each "stanza", assuming each begins with "I wish" and ends with "I can't", slowly gets longer and longer.

It's got a very powerful last sentence.

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