for Heaven Ain't Close9/25/2008 c5 AMM3485
I saw a couple of typos that you can probably catch by printing out and editing this chapter but nothing that took away from my reading. Awesome job this chapter and I can't wait for more.
I saw a couple of typos that you can probably catch by printing out and editing this chapter but nothing that took away from my reading. Awesome job this chapter and I can't wait for more.
6/29/2008 c4 AMM3485
Wow. Now that I will admit was more than a little bit shocking. I don't even know how to reply to that lol. Great chapter.
Wow. Now that I will admit was more than a little bit shocking. I don't even know how to reply to that lol. Great chapter.
3/11/2008 c2 
67trying
That was a really good two chapters. Very to-the-point, and well written.
I can't wait for more, update soon! :)
67tryingThat was a really good two chapters. Very to-the-point, and well written.
I can't wait for more, update soon! :)
2/2/2008 c2 1138
Wow
Damn you Beth, you have no idea what those last few sentences of Chapter 2 has done to my body temperature, lol.
GOD! You're amazing at writing the dirty stuff hahaha.
Angelice Moreno? Awesome name, but why did you use the male spelling of brunette? Morena is the female spelling, right. Oh well!
UPDATE. Pwease? =[
Wow
Damn you Beth, you have no idea what those last few sentences of Chapter 2 has done to my body temperature, lol.
GOD! You're amazing at writing the dirty stuff hahaha.
Angelice Moreno? Awesome name, but why did you use the male spelling of brunette? Morena is the female spelling, right. Oh well!
UPDATE. Pwease? =[