
8/1/2008 c1
1J'Adore Les Phoques
I was drinking water when reading this, so maybe that's why I like it so much... naw, it's just really good.

I was drinking water when reading this, so maybe that's why I like it so much... naw, it's just really good.
1/13/2008 c1
14i am not what i have
if only you can upload the picture that you drew for this poem haha
i really like this, especially the last line. You know what, i think I'll take the time to read all your poems. :)

if only you can upload the picture that you drew for this poem haha
i really like this, especially the last line. You know what, i think I'll take the time to read all your poems. :)
1/10/2008 c1
30Majorkami
This seems simple at first glance, yet its surpisingly deep. Good work.
By the way, the line about old people being wrinkly is cute :)

This seems simple at first glance, yet its surpisingly deep. Good work.
By the way, the line about old people being wrinkly is cute :)
1/10/2008 c1
20Twilight Starr
Very interesting poem. Great job on description. Nice work. Good luck with poetry and life.
~Twilight Starr~

Very interesting poem. Great job on description. Nice work. Good luck with poetry and life.
~Twilight Starr~