for Gorgeous2/16/2019 c1 
3Lulu Bunni
I completely loved it! Soo cute!
I don't know what else to say ! It was a very romantic one shot!
I entered your story with little hopes, a lot of other stories that I just visited haven't been very good.
But then I read yours and boom! It's really good, cute and romantic. In fact, is like a perfect scene (maybe with a little bit of more details) in between a deep romantic and meaningful storie, if you ever motivate to write it.
Thank you for sharing it with us!
Lulu-Bunny*
3Lulu BunniI completely loved it! Soo cute!
I don't know what else to say ! It was a very romantic one shot!
I entered your story with little hopes, a lot of other stories that I just visited haven't been very good.
But then I read yours and boom! It's really good, cute and romantic. In fact, is like a perfect scene (maybe with a little bit of more details) in between a deep romantic and meaningful storie, if you ever motivate to write it.
Thank you for sharing it with us!
Lulu-Bunny*
4/9/2012 c1 ColourCascade
You know when you see something or read something so beautiful abd meaningful you tear up a little bit? This made me do that, and smile too. It seems like it could come from a whole story not just a oneshot, and it would be like the climax to the story. It would be the part that I would read over an over and over, and then go back and read it again :) I think, if you were looking for ways to make it even better you could be really really descriptive, so you can imagine that moment so clearly in your mind when you read it. To me it seems like the kind of scene that I could read about for pages and pages. So I absolutely love this story :)
You know when you see something or read something so beautiful abd meaningful you tear up a little bit? This made me do that, and smile too. It seems like it could come from a whole story not just a oneshot, and it would be like the climax to the story. It would be the part that I would read over an over and over, and then go back and read it again :) I think, if you were looking for ways to make it even better you could be really really descriptive, so you can imagine that moment so clearly in your mind when you read it. To me it seems like the kind of scene that I could read about for pages and pages. So I absolutely love this story :)
8/25/2010 c1 1x Farii
You know how you stumble upon one of those stories, love it but have no clue what to say?
Yeah this was one of them.
Beautifully written
1x FariiYou know how you stumble upon one of those stories, love it but have no clue what to say?
Yeah this was one of them.
Beautifully written
3/19/2010 c1 3MidniteLayce
Wow, what a great one-shot! :)
And definitely happier than "Hills Like White Elephants". I do see the similarities though- one unsure and doubting the decision, wanting things to be normal, and the other assuring the first that its the 'right' thing to do. Though the gender switch between the characters and the different decision make it stand out and takes it in a much lighter, more joyful direction.
It was short but immensely sweet. And I wasn't sure whether to take the summary literally or not until I read that yes, he was, in fact, actually Seeing her for the first time. Very cute and well-written. ;) I really liked it!
~ MidniteLayce19
3MidniteLayceWow, what a great one-shot! :)
And definitely happier than "Hills Like White Elephants". I do see the similarities though- one unsure and doubting the decision, wanting things to be normal, and the other assuring the first that its the 'right' thing to do. Though the gender switch between the characters and the different decision make it stand out and takes it in a much lighter, more joyful direction.
It was short but immensely sweet. And I wasn't sure whether to take the summary literally or not until I read that yes, he was, in fact, actually Seeing her for the first time. Very cute and well-written. ;) I really liked it!
~ MidniteLayce19
2/21/2010 c1 2obijuankenobi
I understand, and I love it.
Ah, so cute.
I love all your stories.
They're so...perfect.
And I HATE perfection.
But I love your stories, so yeah...
2obijuankenobiI understand, and I love it.
Ah, so cute.
I love all your stories.
They're so...perfect.
And I HATE perfection.
But I love your stories, so yeah...