
4/24/2013 c30 Guest
NO NO NO NO put one more chapter pls ps pls pls?
Oh and it's spelt as tank top not tang top.
NO NO NO NO put one more chapter pls ps pls pls?
Oh and it's spelt as tank top not tang top.
8/24/2012 c17 AnonymousReads
Why does everyone love the name lucas i hate that name reminds me of mucus
Why does everyone love the name lucas i hate that name reminds me of mucus
1/7/2012 c30
2socialbutrfly1379
AWWWHH! I loved this story, especially the end. It was cute. I like how a few chapters back, youu had Carter have drinking problems and such. Great plot. Keep writing!

AWWWHH! I loved this story, especially the end. It was cute. I like how a few chapters back, youu had Carter have drinking problems and such. Great plot. Keep writing!
3/5/2011 c10 Barbie826
Was interested in this, until the pregnant part. It's not you, it's just I'm not usually a fan of that type of thing in stories like this.
Was interested in this, until the pregnant part. It's not you, it's just I'm not usually a fan of that type of thing in stories like this.
12/25/2010 c1 Guest
your sentences and sequence of what happens in the story doesnt really seem like it "flows". there isnt really any transition to your events, and your dialogue sounds like a bunch of beginner actors repeating whats on their script but not actually adding any emotion to it. idk, it might just be me, but your story is like a little bug just buzzing around my head and i cant seem to get rid of it. sorry.
your sentences and sequence of what happens in the story doesnt really seem like it "flows". there isnt really any transition to your events, and your dialogue sounds like a bunch of beginner actors repeating whats on their script but not actually adding any emotion to it. idk, it might just be me, but your story is like a little bug just buzzing around my head and i cant seem to get rid of it. sorry.
12/23/2010 c2 colene
This is giving me a Mary-Sue vibe. I think I'm gonna stop reading now...
This is giving me a Mary-Sue vibe. I think I'm gonna stop reading now...
10/21/2010 c30
17Lady of romance world88
Your story is so sweet and cute. I am so sorry for Jimmy. I glad that Carter finally woke up and start to change his life for Gracie. How cute that Gracie and Carter have 3 wonderful children. I wonder if they are plan to buy a puppy or kitten for them? :) Wow how cute twins that Aiden and Michelle have. I am look forward to your next story. I hope its Gavin's story or one of Gracie's children - Mia's story. Can't wait for it. Keep writing. :D

Your story is so sweet and cute. I am so sorry for Jimmy. I glad that Carter finally woke up and start to change his life for Gracie. How cute that Gracie and Carter have 3 wonderful children. I wonder if they are plan to buy a puppy or kitten for them? :) Wow how cute twins that Aiden and Michelle have. I am look forward to your next story. I hope its Gavin's story or one of Gracie's children - Mia's story. Can't wait for it. Keep writing. :D
8/21/2010 c30 Da-zGreen
hahaah. Do I hear a sequel? lol. I kind of thought that you should have gotten her madder at Carter. I wanted him to beg her to gave him her forgivness. Anyways, good story!
hahaah. Do I hear a sequel? lol. I kind of thought that you should have gotten her madder at Carter. I wanted him to beg her to gave him her forgivness. Anyways, good story!