
3/4/2008 c22 geminibaby6789
HE CHEATED? Damm..I so didn't see that coming! He might also have another kid! All I have to say is well done. That threw me in a loop. Can't wait to find out what happens next! Thanks! Update soon!
HE CHEATED? Damm..I so didn't see that coming! He might also have another kid! All I have to say is well done. That threw me in a loop. Can't wait to find out what happens next! Thanks! Update soon!
3/4/2008 c22
2thealmightyone
Even though this chapter was sorta short this one was my favorite. The drama-y part of the stories are always the best. But you had a way with this chapter of making it seem real with real emotions. ANd i have to admit that i choked up a little.

Even though this chapter was sorta short this one was my favorite. The drama-y part of the stories are always the best. But you had a way with this chapter of making it seem real with real emotions. ANd i have to admit that i choked up a little.
3/4/2008 c22 michelle
wow, i so wanna kill carter right about now! how the hell could he do that? update son darlin.
wow, i so wanna kill carter right about now! how the hell could he do that? update son darlin.
3/3/2008 c21 Lillian LaRue
Very gripping plot. I swear I almost hit my mother when she made me turn off the computer in the middle of a chapter. One thing is though, spell and grammar check. You are using the wrong form of words a lot. That's pretty much all. I can't wait for the rest.
Very gripping plot. I swear I almost hit my mother when she made me turn off the computer in the middle of a chapter. One thing is though, spell and grammar check. You are using the wrong form of words a lot. That's pretty much all. I can't wait for the rest.
3/2/2008 c21
1tanya2byour21
Oh wow I so can't wait to find out what is going on with Cater. Keep up the great writing and please post more when you can.
Tanya

Oh wow I so can't wait to find out what is going on with Cater. Keep up the great writing and please post more when you can.
Tanya
3/2/2008 c21 geminibaby6789
Damm..what's wrong with Carter anyway. That was freaky. Wonder where he went? Thanks for the chapter! Can't wait for the next one! Update soon!
Damm..what's wrong with Carter anyway. That was freaky. Wonder where he went? Thanks for the chapter! Can't wait for the next one! Update soon!
3/2/2008 c21
9CountryGal17
oh my god! Carter is an idiot! i want to kill him right now... can't wait for the next chapter

oh my god! Carter is an idiot! i want to kill him right now... can't wait for the next chapter
3/2/2008 c21
4Yuura
Man, I so want to kill Carter now like really really badly. He's so totally or whatever now on my nerves. Okay well, I do hope that whatever his problem is that he lets it get better and if now I'm so totally going to kill him. Anyways, not a bad chapter so I'll be looking forward to your next one.

Man, I so want to kill Carter now like really really badly. He's so totally or whatever now on my nerves. Okay well, I do hope that whatever his problem is that he lets it get better and if now I'm so totally going to kill him. Anyways, not a bad chapter so I'll be looking forward to your next one.
3/2/2008 c21
9Manga Girl Lover
jeez. what in the world could have happened to Carter? It makes absolutely no sense what so ever. hm :o hope you post more soon because I want to know! lol

jeez. what in the world could have happened to Carter? It makes absolutely no sense what so ever. hm :o hope you post more soon because I want to know! lol