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3/4/2008 c22 geminibaby6789
HE CHEATED? Damm..I so didn't see that coming! He might also have another kid! All I have to say is well done. That threw me in a loop. Can't wait to find out what happens next! Thanks! Update soon!
3/4/2008 c22 2thealmightyone
Even though this chapter was sorta short this one was my favorite. The drama-y part of the stories are always the best. But you had a way with this chapter of making it seem real with real emotions. ANd i have to admit that i choked up a little.
3/4/2008 c22 michelle
wow, i so wanna kill carter right about now! how the hell could he do that? update son darlin.
3/4/2008 c22 1Fleeting Moment
I can't review much I'm crying to much...WAH!
3/4/2008 c22 3SimplySweetnSour
well that was unexpected
3/3/2008 c21 2Lady of Confusion
holy hell...UPDATE SOON!
3/3/2008 c21 Lillian LaRue
Very gripping plot. I swear I almost hit my mother when she made me turn off the computer in the middle of a chapter. One thing is though, spell and grammar check. You are using the wrong form of words a lot. That's pretty much all. I can't wait for the rest.
3/3/2008 c1 4rockMus
really good
3/2/2008 c21 1tanya2byour21
Oh wow I so can't wait to find out what is going on with Cater. Keep up the great writing and please post more when you can.

Tanya
3/2/2008 c21 1Fleeting Moment
This whole freaking story rocks! But I mean what's happening? UPDATE!
3/2/2008 c21 3SimplySweetnSour
intense.

which reminds me of this shirt i saw
3/2/2008 c21 geminibaby6789
Damm..what's wrong with Carter anyway. That was freaky. Wonder where he went? Thanks for the chapter! Can't wait for the next one! Update soon!
3/2/2008 c21 9CountryGal17
oh my god! Carter is an idiot! i want to kill him right now... can't wait for the next chapter
3/2/2008 c21 4Yuura
Man, I so want to kill Carter now like really really badly. He's so totally or whatever now on my nerves. Okay well, I do hope that whatever his problem is that he lets it get better and if now I'm so totally going to kill him. Anyways, not a bad chapter so I'll be looking forward to your next one.
3/2/2008 c21 9Manga Girl Lover
jeez. what in the world could have happened to Carter? It makes absolutely no sense what so ever. hm :o hope you post more soon because I want to know! lol
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