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3/2/2008 c21 6lexaxo
this is michelle btw[:

first off, whipped, its wiped ! i don't know how many times i've told you[: i love you though
2/29/2008 c20 Junie-Jun
cute! mia is to cute. aww they are good parents.
2/26/2008 c20 tough review
do you actually think this is a fantastic story? i mean come on, other than the poor beginning, there are SO much grammatical errors, it hurts my brain. i seriously think your English teacher needs to fail you, and put you into the second grade. To Teach you how to spell, commas, and grammar. becuase seriously, this is the worst story I've ever read, grammar wise. I mean come on, how old are you? I bet you're old enough to know how to spell common words like their, there, and they're! To be honest, I like the story plot, and what you're heading to, but you need to do grammar check and spell check, or have someone you trust revise your chapters, so you don't have all these stupid mistakes. I'll admit the story is good, but I'm surpised people haven't bashed you on these mistakes. honey, please check your chapters before putting it up, because I'll tell you right now, if you continue to write like this, people will think you have no educuation, and i'm serious. don't be taking this TOO personal, i'm a constructive reviewer, not a basher.
2/26/2008 c20 FireFallon
Three years is a bit of a jump...but oh well get on with the part where carter proposes and they get married :)
2/25/2008 c20 9Manga Girl Lover
haha! mia is so cute! :) so I take it that Carter and Gracie are not married yet? are they going to get married? I sure hope so!
2/25/2008 c20 2righthere431
=]] its good theyre having a good life so far =]
2/25/2008 c19 righthere431
aw aiden proposed to michelle! wo! =]
2/25/2008 c18 righthere431
aw so adorable =]]
2/25/2008 c20 geminibaby6789
Thanks for the great chapter! Didn't expect the time skip though, but it's all good! Can't wait for the next chapter! Update soon!
2/25/2008 c20 1tanya2byour21
I love it please post more soon.

2/25/2008 c17 2righthere431
mia =]] thats a pretty name =]
2/25/2008 c1 14Not Dead Fred
Flag on the play: inapproriate use of the word "there" Penalty: time out in the corner five minutes. You repeatedly use "there" to replace "their" and "they're"

"There" pertains to location.

"Their" is possesive and indicates the ownership of one or more persons.

"They're" is conjunction used to mean "they are."

It is relatively common place for people to misuse these words.

2/25/2008 c20 4Yuura
She's so cute...I can already tell. Well, I'll be looking forward to your next chapter then. :)
2/25/2008 c20 3SimplySweetnSour
that's quite a time gap
2/25/2008 c20 michelle
such a cute chapter! she's three wot! ahaha, love the ending sentence[: so cute. and her little boyfriend mikey!
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