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2/12/2008 c16 8duckliy543
oh yeah!

great chapter loved it.carter and her work out really well.
2/12/2008 c16 Junie-Jun
aww this is so cute.im madd her parents did that though.great job!
2/12/2008 c16 2Lady of Confusion
LOVE IT! UPDATE SOON!
2/12/2008 c16 simplycarol
gah.

this is wonderful.

well

anyway

update soon

ok?
2/11/2008 c16 geminibaby6789
Thanks for the great chapter! It just keeps getting better and better! Update Soon!
2/11/2008 c16 1tanya2byour21
Oh I love it and so can't wait for the next chapter to find out what is going to happen next. Keep up the great writing and please please post more when you can.

Tanya
2/11/2008 c16 4Yuura
Oh my gosh...really interesting chapter and all. It's great and so I'll be looking forward to your next chapter then. :)
2/11/2008 c16 9CountryGal17
Carter is awesome! He gives the best and he's just so cute! update soon!
2/11/2008 c15 4Nicole Deming
Aw its getting better and better. Update soon.
2/11/2008 c15 JZK
lol

that argument was funny
2/10/2008 c15 geminibaby6789
Thanks! Update soon!
2/10/2008 c14 geminibaby6789
I love this story! I'm glad that they decided to be together! Can't wait for the next one! Update soon!
2/10/2008 c15 3emotionless-stares
lol thats cute gambling
2/10/2008 c15 bobbychu
hey i was wondering if you know why your story sends me lie two to three alerts per chapter... lemme know =]]
2/10/2008 c15 2Simple Thoughts
I loved the beginning of this story. And I am disspointed with the unrealistic direction it has taken. I have had friends who have had unprotected sex, and they as well as any educated teenager of this day in age would be aware of the pill. However, I respect your right as an author for any plot line that you would like. However, I really think that you would benefit from a beta. You have many spelling and grammtical mistakes. For instance "musketries" is supposed to be "musketiers" and "carnel" should be kernal. Please, don't take this the wrong way, I am just trying to offer some constuctive critism.
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