for It All Started With A Crash1/20/2008 c4 
4Nicole Deming
Please please please dont stop this story its going really good and you just started it. I think you should keep going.
4Nicole DemingPlease please please dont stop this story its going really good and you just started it. I think you should keep going.
1/20/2008 c4 michelle
hha, great chapter. loved it,
hha, great chapter. loved it,
1/20/2008 c4 PerfectChaos859
i loved this chapter very funny made me giggle!
thereare just a couple spelling errors and what not that were overlooked other than that great story!
=D
i loved this chapter very funny made me giggle!
thereare just a couple spelling errors and what not that were overlooked other than that great story!
=D
1/16/2008 c3 4Yuura
It's not bad and I'm really looking forward to your next chapter, so keep writing more. :)
4YuuraIt's not bad and I'm really looking forward to your next chapter, so keep writing more. :)
1/16/2008 c3 4starzdestiny
interesting, but maybe you should change the format...its easier to read that way, but overall, an interesting start!
4starzdestinyinteresting, but maybe you should change the format...its easier to read that way, but overall, an interesting start!
1/15/2008 c3 4Nicole Deming
Man hes rude. She was being all nice to him and then hes gotta act like that. I think it was just to show her brother that hes not too into her. Hmm am i right?
4Nicole DemingMan hes rude. She was being all nice to him and then hes gotta act like that. I think it was just to show her brother that hes not too into her. Hmm am i right?
1/13/2008 c2 PerfectChaos859
i have a feeling i am going to love this story
cant wait for the next chapter!
=D
i have a feeling i am going to love this story
cant wait for the next chapter!
=D
1/13/2008 c2 michelle
haha, carter sounds hot. i absoloutly adored the chapter!
update soon.
haha, carter sounds hot. i absoloutly adored the chapter!
update soon.
1/13/2008 c2 JadeDream
awesome an update today! wasnt there another friend of her brothers besides the two playing video games tho? anyway update soon!
awesome an update today! wasnt there another friend of her brothers besides the two playing video games tho? anyway update soon!
1/13/2008 c1 JadeDream
this sounds good so far. i like aiden! well update soon i cant wait to see what happens!
this sounds good so far. i like aiden! well update soon i cant wait to see what happens!