for A Portrait6/9/2008 c1 
306Ashelin
The sad truth for so many. It's amazing how we can waste away in it. Actually it makes me think of this play called "Krapps Last Tape" for some reason. Maybe the imagery, maybe the attitude. It is quite a good poem though. And good job with the note, not everyone is motivated enough to go looking for those things (readers I mean). Anyway, this was an excellent poem. Great job.
306AshelinThe sad truth for so many. It's amazing how we can waste away in it. Actually it makes me think of this play called "Krapps Last Tape" for some reason. Maybe the imagery, maybe the attitude. It is quite a good poem though. And good job with the note, not everyone is motivated enough to go looking for those things (readers I mean). Anyway, this was an excellent poem. Great job.
1/14/2008 c1 12shadow-of-a-trackless-sea
Very nice job with this. I like how you added the "mystery" of another language in with it. I think that catches the readeer's attention and causes him to think of the words being said. NIce job. ~S.S..
12shadow-of-a-trackless-seaVery nice job with this. I like how you added the "mystery" of another language in with it. I think that catches the readeer's attention and causes him to think of the words being said. NIce job. ~S.S..