for Teach Me to Live1/15/2008 c1 
73An Inside Joke
I like the reveal in the last stanza, and how understated it is. Some of the imagery in the first two stanzas was a bit cliche, particularly the "rainbows and butterflies," but I like the recurring format of "teach me to . . ."
73An Inside JokeI like the reveal in the last stanza, and how understated it is. Some of the imagery in the first two stanzas was a bit cliche, particularly the "rainbows and butterflies," but I like the recurring format of "teach me to . . ."
1/14/2008 c1 81Princess-anna57
This is great. I guess everyone can relate. I hope all goes well and that you achieve what you would like in life. Write on!
~Anna~ ^_^
81Princess-anna57This is great. I guess everyone can relate. I hope all goes well and that you achieve what you would like in life. Write on!
~Anna~ ^_^