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12/24/2008 c6 7So.Who.Will.Call.Me.Beautiful
12/24/2008 c3 So.Who.Will.Call.Me.Beautiful
OH.MY.GOODNESS. he's a jerk! why must all jerk's be hawt?
12/24/2008 c1 So.Who.Will.Call.Me.Beautiful
4/9/2008 c6 Syazen
Great chap...plz update more :)
3/13/2008 c6 11Autumnymph
Awh, how sweet. It's funny how Aki is confused by all the people around her acting weird. Now that you've put reasons behind Yukimaru's behaviour, it does make a bit more sense. I don't know if it's just me, but I felt like Yukimaru was a tad bit too evil and indifferent in the beginning - and even the drastic change now couldn't justify his actions in the past. Not the hitting-kissing thingy, just how you described his smirking, and looks. Like he intentionally wanted her to be pissed. Am I making sense? If I'm not just ignore it.

Yukimaru is definitely trying hard to mend things now huh?

I like the fact that Aki doesn't cower away under his glare.
3/11/2008 c6 2Soosie
Okay, I found a few grammatical errors, but if you read it, it's fine. :) and I love this chapter! It make me really want to read more! I don't think that they're out of character, because they're developing their characters for the readers. I like the idea of Yukimaru being nice on the inside :D it makes me want Aki to go with him. lol but maybe not? I can't wait until the next chapter!
3/3/2008 c5 MidnightThief15
Great chapter and you left us with a good amount of suspense and curiosity. I hope your rehab goes well, good luck. XD
3/3/2008 c4 MidnightThief15
Oh. They're soul mates, literally, destined by fate to be mates while having no choice in the matter. lol. XD
3/3/2008 c3 MidnightThief15
lol. OMG! I love this chapter. Good job. XD
3/3/2008 c2 MidnightThief15
Good chapter and story so far. I can't wait to see what both Ai and Yukimaru turn out to be. Also, even though he was really mean to her, when he said "Soon you will be mine" makes me think that he wants to be with her (lol), that could be why he offered to have her be his girlfriend. Now I'm on to read the next chappie. XD
2/29/2008 c5 syazen
Great! thks 4 da update...hope there's more soon~
2/27/2008 c5 mario
i like it cant wait for the rest
2/26/2008 c5 Soosie
that is amazingly good! can't wait for the next chapter! well, i kind of got comfused in the middle when akemi told the girl she was acting strange. the wording was just a little confusing, but the rest is great!
2/26/2008 c5 11Autumnymph
Another cool character. Nice.

And good luck with your rehab
2/23/2008 c4 syazen
i can't wait what's up next...pls update soon
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