for Peace and End8/12/2008 c1 Jilted Eve
Nice. Though you may have missed a typo:
"Some say there's and after life"
Should be: "Some say there's an after life" Nothing huge.
It was an interesting poem. I liked the title. :)
- AABAT
Nice. Though you may have missed a typo:
"Some say there's and after life"
Should be: "Some say there's an after life" Nothing huge.
It was an interesting poem. I liked the title. :)
- AABAT
1/14/2008 c1 
81Princess-anna57
You will need to spell check the poem as there are many typos, but otherwise I liked the poem. Good job. Write on!
~Anna~ ^_^
81Princess-anna57You will need to spell check the poem as there are many typos, but otherwise I liked the poem. Good job. Write on!
~Anna~ ^_^