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5/28/2011 c1 Garuda01
Nice poem, I'm a mixture of different Asian ethnicities , prominently Malay but with some Japanese blood, so this poem feels like a slap to the face, and about time too, it is time for the government of Japan to admit and write this into their history books, so the future generation learns from our horrors.

No sarcasm, I really feel Japan government should let their children know this.
3/24/2008 c1 12TorgoTheWhite
I've personally seen grisly footages of the experimentation conducted by Unit 731. As a result this poem really resonated with me.
1/18/2008 c1 12Cam S
Interesting subject matter, but I noticed some problematic areas, such as "walls do not constraint their evil".

The meter seems a little off, too...not quite sure how to fix that, though.
1/16/2008 c1 2Maline Elensar
well written

i agree we shouldnt forget the horrors of the past otherwise they will happen again
1/15/2008 c1 dreamshell
*Jave Harron* wrote a *poem*? Well, after all, the source material is comparable to your own "unique" style. =D

Nice touch with the letters that add up to spell "Shiro Ishii". As well as the "log" reference (Maruta).

Two typos I'll point out;

"When the three alls fail...". "Alls" should be "all".

"In addition, biological and chemical weapons were testing in the surrounding countryside." "Testing" should be "tested".

And what, no mention of switched limbs? Aw...

Returning some videotapes,

Love, dreamshell

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