
2/25/2008 c1
17Canoegirl42
This is a great poem! The simplicity really brings out the crispness of the cold, and its very cute! Keep up the amazing work!

This is a great poem! The simplicity really brings out the crispness of the cold, and its very cute! Keep up the amazing work!
1/20/2008 c1
19WeAreBroken
Sisters! Ha I love it. Nice to see older sisters apreciate the little ones everyonce and a while.

Sisters! Ha I love it. Nice to see older sisters apreciate the little ones everyonce and a while.
1/20/2008 c1
30End-of-forever
Oh. I liked this. The way you wrote it - really simple, short phrases - made me feel like I was in a little girl's head again. Very nice...well done.

Oh. I liked this. The way you wrote it - really simple, short phrases - made me feel like I was in a little girl's head again. Very nice...well done.
1/20/2008 c1 alwaysthereforyou
This is really very sweet. I like the format of the short lines, it fits the poem very well. Nicely done. :)
This is really very sweet. I like the format of the short lines, it fits the poem very well. Nicely done. :)