for Moonlight5/1/2008 c1 
17Canoegirl42
This is incredible! The imagery is so vivid, and the use of meter is wonderful!
17Canoegirl42This is incredible! The imagery is so vivid, and the use of meter is wonderful!
1/20/2008 c1 30End-of-forever
Hmm. For some odd reason, this reminded me of The Lady of Shalott...I don't know if you read poetry or not, but if you DO, and haven't read that, you should. Something about a girl siting by her window. Anyway, this is beautiful. She reminds me of me, sitting at her window at night, writing poetry. Except for the 'head of golden hair' bit. Well done!
30End-of-foreverHmm. For some odd reason, this reminded me of The Lady of Shalott...I don't know if you read poetry or not, but if you DO, and haven't read that, you should. Something about a girl siting by her window. Anyway, this is beautiful. She reminds me of me, sitting at her window at night, writing poetry. Except for the 'head of golden hair' bit. Well done!
1/15/2008 c1 82Billie.Joelle
Wow, incredible. Its a topic not many people could write about well, but you did an amazing job. A testament to a great poet! I love the descriptions in it. Very nice work.
82Billie.JoelleWow, incredible. Its a topic not many people could write about well, but you did an amazing job. A testament to a great poet! I love the descriptions in it. Very nice work.