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12/8/2008 c1 Aspiring.person
one word: Brilliant.

im in the middle of my exams right now,but your poem made me smile a good true smile after such a long time! its a really nice poem! keep up the good work!

tc!
1/21/2008 c1 32Dreaming Chica
Beautiful! I love how you change from just wishing to tring and doing for your self! A very powerfyl piece you have written! Very nice flow to it also!

♥ Dreaming Chica ♥
1/20/2008 c1 Unknown Survivor
Another good piece here. It really made me stop and think. Nice job.

~Unknown Survivor~
1/20/2008 c1 alwaysthereforyou
This is really empowering. I like how it starts with wishing but then turns into acting instead of waiting around for something that might never happened. I'm definitely going to read this the next time I'm feeling sad and like happiness is unattainable. Keep it up, your writing is great.

~peace
1/16/2008 c1 62Kiwi-kiwi6
Wow. That was powerful. I really like it.

~kiwi-kiwi
1/15/2008 c1 82Billie.Joelle
I can see why you read that on your "cloudy days". I love the transition from wishing to trying. very nice. I like it! Very descriptive and real. Good job!

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