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3/24/2008 c1 24ilovetheopera
Hm. Not my usual style, but I like this. The short sentences serve your poem well, and the rhyme prevents the poem from being too disjointed. Can't say much about the plot though.

Good job to you, too.
1/18/2008 c1 20MKSub
I like this idea.

I think you could work on the flow.

"(but) felt by few" maybe?

It just seems to flow really well in some places.

and them it just, doesn't in others.

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