
3/24/2008 c1
24ilovetheopera
Hm. Not my usual style, but I like this. The short sentences serve your poem well, and the rhyme prevents the poem from being too disjointed. Can't say much about the plot though.
Good job to you, too.

Hm. Not my usual style, but I like this. The short sentences serve your poem well, and the rhyme prevents the poem from being too disjointed. Can't say much about the plot though.
Good job to you, too.