8/19/2008 c1 588Setsuna529
That person is lucky to have such a strong, loving, wonderful friend. The poem is short but says everything it needs to. Great writing.
That person is lucky to have such a strong, loving, wonderful friend. The poem is short but says everything it needs to. Great writing.
2/21/2008 c1 13Shelby Lambert
Great poem. I love the rhyming scheme. I'm not a big fan of poems that don't rhyme, as you will be able to tell if you read my poetry. Keep up the good work!
Great poem. I love the rhyming scheme. I'm not a big fan of poems that don't rhyme, as you will be able to tell if you read my poetry. Keep up the good work!
1/31/2008 c1 AlbanianAtHeart
I really like this poem. It is simple yet elegant with a serious, but friendly tone. I love how it rhymes (something hard to come by nowadays) and flows well. The message is clear and well told. Overall, I love it. Great job.
I really like this poem. It is simple yet elegant with a serious, but friendly tone. I love how it rhymes (something hard to come by nowadays) and flows well. The message is clear and well told. Overall, I love it. Great job.