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nice!
nice!
1/18/2008 c1 
102Aomera
i take no offence :D i did pause a moment at it - but totally understand! tis a great poem, incredible you carried the beat through the whole thing so it flows really well! i love the beginning best, it works the most i think, especially this bit:
'would the fish learn to fly
and take over the sky
and the birds and the bees
cease to nest in the trees'
Keep writing! Ax
102Aomerai take no offence :D i did pause a moment at it - but totally understand! tis a great poem, incredible you carried the beat through the whole thing so it flows really well! i love the beginning best, it works the most i think, especially this bit:
'would the fish learn to fly
and take over the sky
and the birds and the bees
cease to nest in the trees'
Keep writing! Ax