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8/5/2013 c20
2rusty-reader998
nice twist I thought there was going to be the usual love triangle thats getting a little boring :D
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nice twist I thought there was going to be the usual love triangle thats getting a little boring :D
7/9/2012 c22 Blink.Twice
This is so awesome! I can't begin to think how much thought you put in the title names let alone this whole story! You rock, I love your stories.
This is so awesome! I can't begin to think how much thought you put in the title names let alone this whole story! You rock, I love your stories.
11/2/2011 c22 DayDreamer99
I rly wish that u finish this story. U cant just leave me @ a cliffhanger like this. Plz finish this story even if all it needs is just onr more chapter. PLZPLZPLZ! _
I rly wish that u finish this story. U cant just leave me @ a cliffhanger like this. Plz finish this story even if all it needs is just onr more chapter. PLZPLZPLZ! _
8/30/2011 c22
10takemetoinfinity122
Wtf! Whyd you quit! Please! Please! Please! Continue! I love this! Please!
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Wtf! Whyd you quit! Please! Please! Please! Continue! I love this! Please!
10/13/2010 c22 Guest
write more!
write more!
7/27/2010 c22
2PrettyInPink001
This has been such a cute story! It's really sweet and funny and has made me smile repeatedly. Really amazing job, though I do have one suggestion. If I were you, I would make Rob more flamboyant in the other chapters. That way though we never would have guessed, all the signs were subtly there,
but you just have to look for them. I think that would take it to a whole new level.
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This has been such a cute story! It's really sweet and funny and has made me smile repeatedly. Really amazing job, though I do have one suggestion. If I were you, I would make Rob more flamboyant in the other chapters. That way though we never would have guessed, all the signs were subtly there,
but you just have to look for them. I think that would take it to a whole new level.
Please check out my stories!
5/29/2010 c7
1Jewls306
Love the story so far! Just one question... How does Dustin have Nadine's cell number?
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Love the story so far! Just one question... How does Dustin have Nadine's cell number?
4/25/2010 c2
1millienmile
kay so im normally not really critical in reviews but this irked me so i thought i would say something. And dont get me wrong im going to keep reading coz i like the feel of it. But if your going to write in first person you can't include things that your protagonist isnt there for. Like you went from first person to the third person which generally isnt good. Like i understand why you wanted to add that part in but i think you should have had that in a conversation between Nadine and her.
Anyway im sorry if ive offended you but i thought it should be said. Other than that so far im liking the story
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kay so im normally not really critical in reviews but this irked me so i thought i would say something. And dont get me wrong im going to keep reading coz i like the feel of it. But if your going to write in first person you can't include things that your protagonist isnt there for. Like you went from first person to the third person which generally isnt good. Like i understand why you wanted to add that part in but i think you should have had that in a conversation between Nadine and her.
Anyway im sorry if ive offended you but i thought it should be said. Other than that so far im liking the story
4/11/2010 c14 i v o r y w i n g s
I'm Chelsea! ^.^ LOL I really like it, I'm gonna read as much as I can tonight. I also love all your other stories :D I'm pretty sure I've read them all. XD You are a great writer! And I voted on your pics! 5's all the friggen way! They're great!
I'm Chelsea! ^.^ LOL I really like it, I'm gonna read as much as I can tonight. I also love all your other stories :D I'm pretty sure I've read them all. XD You are a great writer! And I voted on your pics! 5's all the friggen way! They're great!
4/10/2010 c22 alice XD
Vince just sounds totally hot! love the story and carnt wait for you to finish.
Vince just sounds totally hot! love the story and carnt wait for you to finish.
4/3/2010 c19
6ithinkyourgay
love this story,
its hilarious.
i think mia's going to fall for vince
but your summary says she will falling for will.
guess i'll have to see.
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love this story,
its hilarious.
i think mia's going to fall for vince
but your summary says she will falling for will.
guess i'll have to see.
1/4/2010 c3
1TheLittleGirlWithAFrenchBeret
I'm going to guess you weren't planning on continuing...but I think you should finish the story...you know, for the readers sake :]
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I'm going to guess you weren't planning on continuing...but I think you should finish the story...you know, for the readers sake :]