for It's Just Mia1/19/2008 c3 toothpastemirrage
Can't wait to see what she dose.
Can't wait to see what she dose.
1/19/2008 c3 
5Keerasee
Haha! Loved this chapter! This is shaping up to be a really good story, I can't wait to see what she comes up with!
5KeeraseeHaha! Loved this chapter! This is shaping up to be a really good story, I can't wait to see what she comes up with!
1/19/2008 c2 Keerasee
Ooh... interesting! Loved the 'What I said' and 'What I was really thinking' lines. Mia is shaping up to be a great character, and I like your style of writing. Keep up the good work!
Ooh... interesting! Loved the 'What I said' and 'What I was really thinking' lines. Mia is shaping up to be a great character, and I like your style of writing. Keep up the good work!
1/18/2008 c2 4e.brooks
Haha cool! You should update soon...it's going somewhere I hope=P
~Lady Rai xx
4e.brooksHaha cool! You should update soon...it's going somewhere I hope=P
~Lady Rai xx
1/18/2008 c2 8heartfeltlove
Why does everyone make their main charater short?
It really irritates me.
Anyways pay me no mind I really like your story so far UPDATE SOON!
8heartfeltloveWhy does everyone make their main charater short?
It really irritates me.
Anyways pay me no mind I really like your story so far UPDATE SOON!
1/18/2008 c1 Guest
It sounds awesome! I can't wait to see how this will go!
It sounds awesome! I can't wait to see how this will go!
1/18/2008 c1 Thunderhorse
*applause* Nice so far. But yes, the last sentence kind of doesn't relate to the rest of the passage. Also...2.5 kids?
I hope you continue. I want to see how this goes. Alerted.
- Thunderhorse.
*applause* Nice so far. But yes, the last sentence kind of doesn't relate to the rest of the passage. Also...2.5 kids?
I hope you continue. I want to see how this goes. Alerted.
- Thunderhorse.
1/18/2008 c1 5Keerasee
Sounds intersting, great finishing line! I'd like to see wher eyou go with this.
5KeeraseeSounds intersting, great finishing line! I'd like to see wher eyou go with this.
1/18/2008 c1 40WriterXO
This is def. different and looks to be quite the interesting story. I'm curious as to where this is going to go and how things are going to turn out. Like the introduction leaves people suspcious but also gives a little background to have a glimpse on what this is about. Good job. Looking forward to the updates. Just one thing- the last sentence is confusing. Like it's a little off topic to everything mentioned above. Just a suggestion.
40WriterXOThis is def. different and looks to be quite the interesting story. I'm curious as to where this is going to go and how things are going to turn out. Like the introduction leaves people suspcious but also gives a little background to have a glimpse on what this is about. Good job. Looking forward to the updates. Just one thing- the last sentence is confusing. Like it's a little off topic to everything mentioned above. Just a suggestion.