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3/23/2009 c22 2HelgaBertoni
Good Job!
3/18/2009 c11 ABC123
This is turning into quite the mess isn't it?
3/18/2009 c3 Anonymous
This definitely sound entertaining.
2/10/2009 c22 5I Murder on Impulse
vute

xx
2/7/2009 c22 music-is-love10
*new reader*

i just read your whole story and its awesome. i love the nonc-cliche thing.

its great! please update soon
1/29/2009 c22 Erica71167
You totally had me going with the ending of the last one, but this was great! Good job!
1/29/2009 c21 Erica71167
Yay for Vince! I love it! I've read a couple of stories you had on your favorites list and they were awesome!
1/27/2009 c22 all4hydration
i have to say this is a good plot... i'm a little disappointed that Mia didn't go all gung-ho on Will in the cafe but then that would have made Vince's fight less dramatic... i like i like
1/25/2009 c2 10nul
Okay, so I found your story on this forum page on FP, and decided to check it out. I'm in dire need of something refreshing to read.

So far, so good. I am reviewing this as reading so that if there were any typos/errors that need to be pointed out aren't forgotten. :))

First off, there was a typo in the sentence:

"..Yet he doesn't sleep around like some of the other guys, and generally seems like a nice guy. I think the only reason he's popular is because of Will Howard, the kind of his crowd."

"kind"? It makes sense in a way, but I thought it might be "king."

:D

Another thing:

"..'Hey Jeremy'..."

That whole scene.

I don't think it makes sense, at least to me, on how she leaves but she knows the exact dialouge of what happens.

Maybe separate that part where Nadine hears this.

It'd make it less confusing.

Well hope the feedback is beneficial towards you! I'm going to go read more!

YAY! :P

kthnxbai,

Martin the Waterskier
1/21/2009 c22 sarcasm is my middle name
Wow, this is just as good as a Trip on the Lips!

great story, especialyl love the ending!
1/20/2009 c20 Erica71167
Great story! Looking forward to the rest!
1/20/2009 c13 Erica71167
I'm dying of laughter right now! Great job!
1/8/2009 c22 10fluff.flower
wowie wow wow! i realy luv tis story. keep it up!
12/31/2008 c22 2i love life
this is a really good 1...

update soon pls
11/27/2008 c22 Kathadoodle
This chapter is adorable. In fact this whole story is adorable! Update ASAP!
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