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7/25/2009 c1 Bama
Wow! Now I understand the difference between writing and sheer unleashed creative writing. It has been a long time since my eyes glanced over something so beautifully vivid, short yet emotive, simple, yet engaging, a single short scene which tells a hundrd stories.
3/8/2008 c1 6for the hell of it
it is very, very creepy.

effectively so.

good stuff.
2/21/2008 c1 121doctor's diagnosis
Twisted, yes, but beautiful. This, oh, this made my head spin and my heart race. Great. Really, really great.
1/25/2008 c1 twisty
Omg its the clay story! finally!

"In his embrace, she is indistinct."

"She must not die imperfect."

Absolutely fucking wonderful. I'm going to have to paint this

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1/21/2008 c1 7Arina222
I read it, but I have nothing worth saying.
1/19/2008 c1 53AchtungBabyAchtung
his fingers curve around solid angel wings of bone

With eyes only for faces, you never see the sky

i totally love these lines, they are gorgeous. And the story's good, i like the broken up format (fiction press seems to be more receptive to it: fanficers seem to find it offensive)

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1/19/2008 c1 10notACTUALLYwriting
it's horrible that i'm not disturbed by this, but, nope. nothing. I've been watching Dexter... so serial killers are old news, and the story sort of revolves around the mentality.

I like the line "nobody can do what he can with beauty".

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