
3/24/2008 c1
31Lurid Black
Sweet, I really like this one, the style of rhymes isn't easy to do when they make perfect sense, carefully chosen words, and an interesting topic. Amazing.
~Lurid~

Sweet, I really like this one, the style of rhymes isn't easy to do when they make perfect sense, carefully chosen words, and an interesting topic. Amazing.
~Lurid~
1/19/2008 c1
31Michael l'oeil fol
it ran smoothly in a distracted way. yet this seemed to fit very well with the notion of watchin someone drift away. i like your style...ill be sure to check out more of your work.
Michael

it ran smoothly in a distracted way. yet this seemed to fit very well with the notion of watchin someone drift away. i like your style...ill be sure to check out more of your work.
Michael