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3/24/2008 c1 31Lurid Black
Sweet, I really like this one, the style of rhymes isn't easy to do when they make perfect sense, carefully chosen words, and an interesting topic. Amazing.

~Lurid~
1/19/2008 c1 31Michael l'oeil fol
it ran smoothly in a distracted way. yet this seemed to fit very well with the notion of watchin someone drift away. i like your style...ill be sure to check out more of your work.

Michael
1/19/2008 c1 7cpneb
Another jewel from a jewel named Marriella. This is a nice explanation of how we feel and respond at times when we have no idea how to feel or respond...

Glad to see another poem from you, dear lady: keep it up.

...cpneb

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