for Memories1/12/2010 c1 
9S'wit
I liked it, it was short but moving (nearly to tears, not good when your in a public computer area)
9S'witI liked it, it was short but moving (nearly to tears, not good when your in a public computer area)
8/17/2009 c1 14musicalemz74
O so easy to relate to. Great poem, it really summarizes your point in a way thats not hard to comprehend. One small note, on the seventh line you forgot one of the m's in remember. Another poem I can relate to! Good job!
14musicalemz74O so easy to relate to. Great poem, it really summarizes your point in a way thats not hard to comprehend. One small note, on the seventh line you forgot one of the m's in remember. Another poem I can relate to! Good job!
2/6/2009 c1 138lael1bologna
I love the ending "i won't remember" it's so true. Memories are just really happy, and sad. It's painfu. You've managed to get this down in a poem is less than 100 words. Bravo!
138lael1bolognaI love the ending "i won't remember" it's so true. Memories are just really happy, and sad. It's painfu. You've managed to get this down in a poem is less than 100 words. Bravo!
12/17/2008 c1 4Beatrice Lane
Very good poem, I liked the lack of rhyme scheme, too many people think poems HAVE to rhyme. Not all poems rhyme, most of mine do, but only 'cause it sounds good. Anyway, nice poem!
4Beatrice LaneVery good poem, I liked the lack of rhyme scheme, too many people think poems HAVE to rhyme. Not all poems rhyme, most of mine do, but only 'cause it sounds good. Anyway, nice poem!