for The Misdial6/13/2013 c40 Guest
It was interesting, with some touching up it could become something big. Good job partner
It was interesting, with some touching up it could become something big. Good job partner
6/13/2013 c35 Guest
i would have let that bitch get raped . da fuck?
i would have let that bitch get raped . da fuck?
6/13/2013 c34 Guest
wow, little bit of an overreaction much? I'd just slap that bitch
wow, little bit of an overreaction much? I'd just slap that bitch
12/7/2008 c40 
3ebo15
OMG i loved this story! all of the different twists and turns kept me guessing and greatly contributed to the mystery in the story. A sequel would be nice though...
3ebo15OMG i loved this story! all of the different twists and turns kept me guessing and greatly contributed to the mystery in the story. A sequel would be nice though...
9/30/2008 c40 8Cant Break The Habit
OH MY GOSH!
EP
AH
NO ITS OVER
it was amazing yay rick is dead hahaha!
aww and sara's pregnant so i guess that means that their getting married..WOOT
a happy ending hmm just goes to show theres never a wrong time or place to find love ^.- good job.
8Cant Break The HabitOH MY GOSH!
EP
AH
NO ITS OVER
it was amazing yay rick is dead hahaha!
aww and sara's pregnant so i guess that means that their getting married..WOOT
a happy ending hmm just goes to show theres never a wrong time or place to find love ^.- good job.
9/29/2008 c40 6blueangel916
ah what a great ending! although i would love to hear more about Sarah, Dave and the baby but all in all it was very satisfying ending thanks for the great read :D
6blueangel916ah what a great ending! although i would love to hear more about Sarah, Dave and the baby but all in all it was very satisfying ending thanks for the great read :D
9/28/2008 c39 blueangel916
that was a great story! i can't wait to read more! i have fallen in love with Dave...ah he seems like such a perfect 'night in shining armor' but at the same time is dealing with reality i love it!
hope to read the next chapter soon :D
that was a great story! i can't wait to read more! i have fallen in love with Dave...ah he seems like such a perfect 'night in shining armor' but at the same time is dealing with reality i love it!
hope to read the next chapter soon :D
9/28/2008 c40 6Elle8605
Wow. It's over. I loved the ending. I was sitting on the edge of my seat as I read. I loved the farmer's line "F*cker shot me". I loved this story. Great ending.
Elle
6Elle8605Wow. It's over. I loved the ending. I was sitting on the edge of my seat as I read. I loved the farmer's line "F*cker shot me". I loved this story. Great ending.
Elle
8/24/2008 c39 8Cant Break The Habit
oh i bet that the truck driver was the dad right? and he kept the barrel loose in there for a reason! but even if im wrong its still funny as hell...arg he cant shoot her Rick should fall into a ditch i thnk that would be funny.
UPDATE
8Cant Break The Habitoh i bet that the truck driver was the dad right? and he kept the barrel loose in there for a reason! but even if im wrong its still funny as hell...arg he cant shoot her Rick should fall into a ditch i thnk that would be funny.
UPDATE
8/13/2008 c38 Cant Break The Habit
UPDATE!
AH
and get rick...oh that dirty scum bag! anyways i thnk sara needs to comfront lauren...shes trouble...still!
UPDATE!
AH
and get rick...oh that dirty scum bag! anyways i thnk sara needs to comfront lauren...shes trouble...still!
7/26/2008 c38 4shootingstar89
wow!
can't wait to hear the plan! i love how everything worked out with the ricky twist to still keep me guessing!
update soon!
i love it!
4shootingstar89wow!
can't wait to hear the plan! i love how everything worked out with the ricky twist to still keep me guessing!
update soon!
i love it!
7/21/2008 c36 shootingstar89
wow, this is getting more suspenseful with every word you write!
i can't wait to hear more!
wow, this is getting more suspenseful with every word you write!
i can't wait to hear more!
7/13/2008 c33 8Cant Break The Habit
oh ouch! didnt see that end comming...gawd what a way to rlly piss sara off...so is lauren rlly wanting to make friends or trying to get with dave? hm UPDATE
8Cant Break The Habitoh ouch! didnt see that end comming...gawd what a way to rlly piss sara off...so is lauren rlly wanting to make friends or trying to get with dave? hm UPDATE
7/12/2008 c33 4shootingstar89
omg, lauren...is a..just wow. she's one of those girls you love to hate...
can't wait for more!
and please don't break them up. i hate it when that happens (and it ALWAYS seems to happen)...
anyways fabulous as always!
4shootingstar89omg, lauren...is a..just wow. she's one of those girls you love to hate...
can't wait for more!
and please don't break them up. i hate it when that happens (and it ALWAYS seems to happen)...
anyways fabulous as always!