for The Misdial7/2/2008 c31 soliloquoy
OK with the whole Lauren thing, please, please, please don't make Dave have like, a fling with her. Cause of course, it will screw up the whole Dave-Sara thing. Which would be really sad. And sometimes it annoys me in stories when the cute couple gets broken up, because then in the end they get back together and everything is wonderful again. It makes stories kind of predictable. But ya, sorry its your story but I just wanted to tell u that lol. And if you do make some sort of um...bump in the road with Sara and Dave...Maybe it should be Sara's fault. In too many stories, its the guy's fault that they break up, which is almost stereotypical. But of course it would be even better if nothing happened! Lol but ya its your story and i will probably like it anywayz. I'm just really hoping that nothing will happen to Dave and Sara's realationship
OK with the whole Lauren thing, please, please, please don't make Dave have like, a fling with her. Cause of course, it will screw up the whole Dave-Sara thing. Which would be really sad. And sometimes it annoys me in stories when the cute couple gets broken up, because then in the end they get back together and everything is wonderful again. It makes stories kind of predictable. But ya, sorry its your story but I just wanted to tell u that lol. And if you do make some sort of um...bump in the road with Sara and Dave...Maybe it should be Sara's fault. In too many stories, its the guy's fault that they break up, which is almost stereotypical. But of course it would be even better if nothing happened! Lol but ya its your story and i will probably like it anywayz. I'm just really hoping that nothing will happen to Dave and Sara's realationship
5/26/2008 c28 
4shootingstar89
wow. just...wow.
that was pure genious and i loved it.
the way everything was planned out...
and i loved the previous chapter too although i didn't have the time to review it when i first read it.
4shootingstar89wow. just...wow.
that was pure genious and i loved it.
the way everything was planned out...
and i loved the previous chapter too although i didn't have the time to review it when i first read it.
5/24/2008 c2 11Lucid Lune in Acoustic
Well I haven't read this in a while. I vaguely remembered the first chapter, but that might be because I read so many stories in a day and I start so many of my own lol. Characters and plots become fuzzy but I am glad I cam back to it.
11Lucid Lune in AcousticWell I haven't read this in a while. I vaguely remembered the first chapter, but that might be because I read so many stories in a day and I start so many of my own lol. Characters and plots become fuzzy but I am glad I cam back to it.
5/16/2008 c26 4shootingstar89
oh my!
good confrontation! and now i can't wait to hear this vengeful plan...suspense! :)
4shootingstar89oh my!
good confrontation! and now i can't wait to hear this vengeful plan...suspense! :)
5/15/2008 c26 1seven.belgian.snowflakes
This is an amazing story with great development in the characters! I lvoe this story and wanted to let you know that you are an amazing author. Thank you for writing this
~SbS
1seven.belgian.snowflakesThis is an amazing story with great development in the characters! I lvoe this story and wanted to let you know that you are an amazing author. Thank you for writing this
~SbS
5/14/2008 c25 4shootingstar89
sweet update!
please tell me soon you're going to write more about sarah? i'm eager to hear what happens with richard's wife...
4shootingstar89sweet update!
please tell me soon you're going to write more about sarah? i'm eager to hear what happens with richard's wife...
5/13/2008 c25 SpiritWolf19
Love this story as usual...especially since i'm a football fan myself. please keep updating!
Love this story as usual...especially since i'm a football fan myself. please keep updating!
5/8/2008 c24 4Yuura
Wow...I just read all of your chapters and it's really wonderful. This chapter well honestly, I was completely shocked. I'll be looking forward to your next update though. (:
4YuuraWow...I just read all of your chapters and it's really wonderful. This chapter well honestly, I was completely shocked. I'll be looking forward to your next update though. (: