for The Misdial2/9/2008 c4 Lochi
aww the call is near. Rick seems to be really shallow. Only big restaurants and wine...wouldn't like him either, when he even don't ask her, where she wants to go...
aww the call is near. Rick seems to be really shallow. Only big restaurants and wine...wouldn't like him either, when he even don't ask her, where she wants to go...
2/9/2008 c3 Lochi
it could be longer, but nevermind. So a new guy's coming. I hope we'll se more phone calls soon :)
it could be longer, but nevermind. So a new guy's coming. I hope we'll se more phone calls soon :)
2/9/2008 c2 Lochi
kinda short chapter, but ok. Finally we know where Sara works. But man..she's 2 years older? ah...that's a little detail I don't like much lol
kinda short chapter, but ok. Finally we know where Sara works. But man..she's 2 years older? ah...that's a little detail I don't like much lol
2/9/2008 c1 Lochi
hi, I like that your idea for this story. He really sounded desperate lol I want to know about Sara's life, I guess I'll see it in the necht chapter :)
Anyway, I really liked it and I'm going to read your next chapters :)
Oh and the last part...Shawn passed out so they are shaving him…come check it out...LOL
hi, I like that your idea for this story. He really sounded desperate lol I want to know about Sara's life, I guess I'll see it in the necht chapter :)
Anyway, I really liked it and I'm going to read your next chapters :)
Oh and the last part...Shawn passed out so they are shaving him…come check it out...LOL
2/5/2008 c14 
4shootingstar89
aw! i love it! the chemistry is definitely there...i can't wait to see more.
4shootingstar89aw! i love it! the chemistry is definitely there...i can't wait to see more.
2/5/2008 c14 6acriter
yay! They finally meet! Your grammar was as good as always and I like how you played the defining moment simply.
6acriteryay! They finally meet! Your grammar was as good as always and I like how you played the defining moment simply.
2/4/2008 c14 5Whisper Rayne
Are you going to update for me? I love the story so much, and I thought that I might not because I just picked it at random. Don't take that the wrong way though. It's a good thing.
5Whisper RayneAre you going to update for me? I love the story so much, and I thought that I might not because I just picked it at random. Don't take that the wrong way though. It's a good thing.
2/3/2008 c13 6acriter
YOu are so fast at updating! Thanks for realising that other people may not be so football savvy as you. I like how you don't immediately break off all connection between Sara and Rick as it is unlikely that he will give up that easily.
6acriterYOu are so fast at updating! Thanks for realising that other people may not be so football savvy as you. I like how you don't immediately break off all connection between Sara and Rick as it is unlikely that he will give up that easily.
1/28/2008 c11 acriter
The last chapter was a little incomprehensible for me, being English and having no clue how American football works. Otherwise it's great! To begin with the dialogue with Peg and Sara was a little forced but it calmed down after a while. Rick is such a pighead... He deserved to get his car smashed up!
The last chapter was a little incomprehensible for me, being English and having no clue how American football works. Otherwise it's great! To begin with the dialogue with Peg and Sara was a little forced but it calmed down after a while. Rick is such a pighead... He deserved to get his car smashed up!
1/27/2008 c10 4shootingstar89
go sara! i love how the scene played out. what a perfect way to display rick for who he is. awesome!
4shootingstar89go sara! i love how the scene played out. what a perfect way to display rick for who he is. awesome!
1/26/2008 c8 shootingstar89
oh! what happened? what a cliffhanger! they're so frustrating, but they definitely have me waiting for more!
oh! what happened? what a cliffhanger! they're so frustrating, but they definitely have me waiting for more!
1/26/2008 c8 6acriter
Oo it's a cliff hanger! Don't leave it too long. Will Sara stand up Dave because she's in hospital or something? I hope not... I like their pairing.
6acriterOo it's a cliff hanger! Don't leave it too long. Will Sara stand up Dave because she's in hospital or something? I hope not... I like their pairing.
1/21/2008 c6 rebellionVII
yeah, i figured the breaks would be a typo. a lot of things don't transfer over.
another excellent chapter. sara's worries are very realistic.
keep going .
yeah, i figured the breaks would be a typo. a lot of things don't transfer over.
another excellent chapter. sara's worries are very realistic.
keep going .