
1/24/2008 c1
13Deep-Breath
"And when he gets to heaven,
To Saint Peter he will tell,
Another Soldier Reporting Sir,
I have served my time in hell."
Please read my entry on "Glory" I think you and me think on lines similar.
Good work, and I like the ending when instead of being dragged off kicking and screaming as many would have, he peacefully goes. His duty is done, his honor fulfilled, and unfortunately...
His blood spilt.

"And when he gets to heaven,
To Saint Peter he will tell,
Another Soldier Reporting Sir,
I have served my time in hell."
Please read my entry on "Glory" I think you and me think on lines similar.
Good work, and I like the ending when instead of being dragged off kicking and screaming as many would have, he peacefully goes. His duty is done, his honor fulfilled, and unfortunately...
His blood spilt.