for Unexpected12/31/2015 c21 Guest
I loved this. It was written like it would happen in reality.
I loved this. It was written like it would happen in reality.
9/28/2013 c1 
4Your Girl
I just can't read this, I'm sorry. The ideas might be good, but the writing is poor. It needs a beta badly, and I actually am picky about the stories I read. Again, sorry.
4Your GirlI just can't read this, I'm sorry. The ideas might be good, but the writing is poor. It needs a beta badly, and I actually am picky about the stories I read. Again, sorry.
2/3/2012 c21 crystalhate
Read this while listening the Avril Lavigne's "Wish You Were Here". It was just a coincidence but the song just fits so perfectly with the story. And I LOVE LOVE LOVE IT! Makes you want to believe that love really conquers all. :)
Read this while listening the Avril Lavigne's "Wish You Were Here". It was just a coincidence but the song just fits so perfectly with the story. And I LOVE LOVE LOVE IT! Makes you want to believe that love really conquers all. :)
6/2/2010 c5 kodkvnnrjgn
I just stumbled upon this story, but I really like it so far! Marissa seems like a very honest character and it's great that she has Connor's full support. Marissa's bffs are pretty funny too. My only other comment is that the dialogue is a little short, like when she tells her parents about her situation. Great job! I will move on to read the rest, now. :)
I just stumbled upon this story, but I really like it so far! Marissa seems like a very honest character and it's great that she has Connor's full support. Marissa's bffs are pretty funny too. My only other comment is that the dialogue is a little short, like when she tells her parents about her situation. Great job! I will move on to read the rest, now. :)
11/21/2009 c21 2bluewingedfox
I absolutely loved this story. I do wish that it could have been a little longer, or detailed, to draw out the ups and downs of this story. I enjoyed the ups and downs, for the fact that I couldn't stop reading really means something. I'm glad I clicked the link to this story.
2bluewingedfoxI absolutely loved this story. I do wish that it could have been a little longer, or detailed, to draw out the ups and downs of this story. I enjoyed the ups and downs, for the fact that I couldn't stop reading really means something. I'm glad I clicked the link to this story.
10/15/2009 c21 three
Loved it!
Loved it!
9/24/2009 c21 Camille
aw this story iz so sweet :) it'd be amazing if love alwayz ended like this.
aw this story iz so sweet :) it'd be amazing if love alwayz ended like this.
9/13/2009 c21 Christina Marrufo
This was, by far, one of the most amazing, compelling stories I have ever had the pleasure of reading.
There are many people in this world. But only two kinds. The ones that cannot entertain, and those that can. You, my dear, are the latter.
I do not cry easily over anything, but I felt tears at the end of the epilogue.
Congrats. You just wrote an awesome novella.
Christina Marrufo )
This was, by far, one of the most amazing, compelling stories I have ever had the pleasure of reading.
There are many people in this world. But only two kinds. The ones that cannot entertain, and those that can. You, my dear, are the latter.
I do not cry easily over anything, but I felt tears at the end of the epilogue.
Congrats. You just wrote an awesome novella.
Christina Marrufo )
6/26/2009 c21 2SinisterSweet
OH MY GOSH!
:D
LIKE I STATED IN THE OTHER COMMENT I LEFT TONIGHT I SERIOUSLY MEANT IT WHEN I SAID I COULDNT STOP READING IT! I just finished it and I loved every bit of it! That story was by far the best one I've ever read. I cried like a baby and I usually don't cry in stories, but this one got emotion out of me and your story just really blew me away. The story made me realize even more how lucky I am to have my fiancee. You are an amazing writer, Keep up the awesome work :)
2SinisterSweetOH MY GOSH!
:D
LIKE I STATED IN THE OTHER COMMENT I LEFT TONIGHT I SERIOUSLY MEANT IT WHEN I SAID I COULDNT STOP READING IT! I just finished it and I loved every bit of it! That story was by far the best one I've ever read. I cried like a baby and I usually don't cry in stories, but this one got emotion out of me and your story just really blew me away. The story made me realize even more how lucky I am to have my fiancee. You are an amazing writer, Keep up the awesome work :)
6/26/2009 c3 SinisterSweet
Wow... I just got on and I was looking through stories and I came across this one, and once I started reading it I just haven't been able to stop.
I love your writing style and I am very intrigued by the vocabulary. I've squealed ''AW'' so many times because Connor and Marissa remind me of me and my fiancee.
Your a very great writer and once again, I love your writing style.
Wow... I just got on and I was looking through stories and I came across this one, and once I started reading it I just haven't been able to stop.
I love your writing style and I am very intrigued by the vocabulary. I've squealed ''AW'' so many times because Connor and Marissa remind me of me and my fiancee.
Your a very great writer and once again, I love your writing style.