1/23/2008 c1 5Drops of Jewpiter
this is really cool. i love the perspective of the poem w/ the camera. also, good job on using second person. that's a hard tense to write in. yay :)
this is really cool. i love the perspective of the poem w/ the camera. also, good job on using second person. that's a hard tense to write in. yay :)
1/23/2008 c1 3Molly Renaud
Its a good way to express something that we all feel sometime.
I like the voice used in it.
yea, its Really good...
-Molly
Its a good way to express something that we all feel sometime.
I like the voice used in it.
yea, its Really good...
-Molly