for Because I said so!12/19/2010 c18 SinisterSmiles
hi fido,
I wanted to thank you not only for this chapter lol but for making my sisters day by dedicating it to her. she told my whole family lol. Your a great writer and i cant wait for your next update. Im keeping my fingers crossed for Madeleine and Martin ;)
hi fido,
I wanted to thank you not only for this chapter lol but for making my sisters day by dedicating it to her. she told my whole family lol. Your a great writer and i cant wait for your next update. Im keeping my fingers crossed for Madeleine and Martin ;)
12/18/2010 c18 
2SmilingSarcasm
Aw, I love martin and Maddie and Lyza. There all so great. I LOVED this chapter, more drama and such. lol I will be waitin for the next update. :)
By the way, I have never ever had a chapter dedicated to me. I swear that was probably the best thing that will happen to me all year! I seriously made all my family & anyone else within yelling distance come and see it. I am still ecstatic! Thank you Thank you Thank you!
Anywho, I can't wait for the next chapter.
2SmilingSarcasmAw, I love martin and Maddie and Lyza. There all so great. I LOVED this chapter, more drama and such. lol I will be waitin for the next update. :)
By the way, I have never ever had a chapter dedicated to me. I swear that was probably the best thing that will happen to me all year! I seriously made all my family & anyone else within yelling distance come and see it. I am still ecstatic! Thank you Thank you Thank you!
Anywho, I can't wait for the next chapter.
12/17/2010 c18 2Sweet.Linda
WHOOA! AN ACTUAL CHAPTER? ;O
Anyways...
M^2 are so cute together. :)
The parts with his friends were absolutely hilarious. :')
And, I love how Martin got all jealous. x]
Maddi was so sweet to Lyza! She was exactly like a mommy. :)
The end was sad though. Like, legit depressing. :(
"Stay."
2Sweet.LindaWHOOA! AN ACTUAL CHAPTER? ;O
Anyways...
M^2 are so cute together. :)
The parts with his friends were absolutely hilarious. :')
And, I love how Martin got all jealous. x]
Maddi was so sweet to Lyza! She was exactly like a mommy. :)
The end was sad though. Like, legit depressing. :(
"Stay."
12/16/2010 c4 lalalove
I really like this! But actually, doumo, initially itself is a very common loose way of saying thank you in Japanese. Arigatou is the same, gozaimasu is actually added in terms of respect. So it sort of sounded like thank you thank you very much to me lol. Other than that, I really adore your story!
I really like this! But actually, doumo, initially itself is a very common loose way of saying thank you in Japanese. Arigatou is the same, gozaimasu is actually added in terms of respect. So it sort of sounded like thank you thank you very much to me lol. Other than that, I really adore your story!
12/16/2010 c18 9Inkpress00
Great job. I thought this wouldn't be coming out... but you gave me a great surprise. An especially long surprise. Thanks a bunch, and please keep going!
-Inky
9Inkpress00Great job. I thought this wouldn't be coming out... but you gave me a great surprise. An especially long surprise. Thanks a bunch, and please keep going!
-Inky
9/5/2010 c17 LondonLi
I really enjoyed this update and equal mental feedback between the characters. I'm glad that Martin's finally getting a clue! Thanks for the new chapter.
I really enjoyed this update and equal mental feedback between the characters. I'm glad that Martin's finally getting a clue! Thanks for the new chapter.
6/26/2010 c17 21deaderthandisco
I love this story! When are you going to update again? You can't abandon this story!
21deaderthandiscoI love this story! When are you going to update again? You can't abandon this story!
6/9/2010 c17 2Sweet.Linda
LMAO TO THE POWER OF A THOUSAND.
That chapter was HILARIOUS and ADORABLE all at the same time. x]
Oulala, they're finally realizing they're meant to be. Tehehehe...
Anyways, update soon please ! :)
2Sweet.LindaLMAO TO THE POWER OF A THOUSAND.
That chapter was HILARIOUS and ADORABLE all at the same time. x]
Oulala, they're finally realizing they're meant to be. Tehehehe...
Anyways, update soon please ! :)
6/9/2010 c14 Perfectly Mythical
I had no idea throughout this whole chapter whose point of veiw it was... change the point of view too much, and you'll confuse the readers, but otherwise, I liked the chapters that at least made sense
I had no idea throughout this whole chapter whose point of veiw it was... change the point of view too much, and you'll confuse the readers, but otherwise, I liked the chapters that at least made sense
6/9/2010 c17 1fights with fire
Aww, they're so cute together. When are they going to kiss already? I liked the fence metaphor, by the way, especially them trying to get the other to fall off like that.
1fights with fireAww, they're so cute together. When are they going to kiss already? I liked the fence metaphor, by the way, especially them trying to get the other to fall off like that.
6/8/2010 c17 9Inkpress00
Ah, thank you! Perhaps my words had some effect on you? Anyway, that was refreshing for my quota of love/hate relationships for the following weeks it may take for you to write the next chapter. Thanks again, because I know that if you're still in school, this can be a busy time of year. Good luck and good night!
Inkpress
9Inkpress00Ah, thank you! Perhaps my words had some effect on you? Anyway, that was refreshing for my quota of love/hate relationships for the following weeks it may take for you to write the next chapter. Thanks again, because I know that if you're still in school, this can be a busy time of year. Good luck and good night!
Inkpress
6/7/2010 c16 Inkpress00
Please do NOT tell me you plan to give this up! I've been waiting for this next chapter since March and I will come over there and virtually beat you up if you don't post at least one more chapter of this! Please! Just ONE more!
Thanks, Inkpress
Please do NOT tell me you plan to give this up! I've been waiting for this next chapter since March and I will come over there and virtually beat you up if you don't post at least one more chapter of this! Please! Just ONE more!
Thanks, Inkpress
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3/17/2010 c16 2SmilingSarcasm
As always I love this story, please update soon. Kyoko and Charles are adorable together!
2SmilingSarcasmAs always I love this story, please update soon. Kyoko and Charles are adorable together!
3/16/2010 c16 2Sweet.Linda
AWWH!
Charles & Kyoko.
That's so adorable. (:
And, and, and!
THEY'RE FINALLY REALIZING THEY LIKE EACH OTHER.
IT'S A MIRACLE! x]
Can't wait for the next chapter!
2Sweet.LindaAWWH!
Charles & Kyoko.
That's so adorable. (:
And, and, and!
THEY'RE FINALLY REALIZING THEY LIKE EACH OTHER.
IT'S A MIRACLE! x]
Can't wait for the next chapter!