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1/27/2008 c1 4Imalefty
weird! i like your descriptions of the phone and the voicemail. we definitely learn a lot about this strange character from this little piece.

i loved the first sentence - it really made me want to read more. :)

i really wanted to know more about this situation... who is she calling (her crush, maybe?)... and why? maybe you'll continue it...? :)

anyway, good job! keep writing!

-Lefty (from the review marathon hosted by the review game forum! - link in my profile)

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