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1/27/2008 c1 19Forever In Shadow
This is subline dear, i realy do like it.

There is a nice sence of rhythem for it.

You've managed to capture a thing most would look down apon in such a bueatiful light.

It also reads like a only poem.

Its probly the rhythem that dose so but it reminds me in style of old clasics.

And there are some nice images, i like the pixies.

So it was well worth the waight.

What on earth were you worryed about?
1/27/2008 c1 92randompoetry
ADORE the theme of this, and ADORE your rhyming. its EXCELLENT. just everything. i loved it all. the vocabulary was also great.

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