for Nobody's Fault But Mine7/9/2008 c13 sunflower.kiss
It's getting really good. Jake is a HUGE jerk. I felt really bad when Bella had to pay. :[ Aw, that's sad. I love your writing, and I can't wait for more! :)
It's getting really good. Jake is a HUGE jerk. I felt really bad when Bella had to pay. :[ Aw, that's sad. I love your writing, and I can't wait for more! :)
7/9/2008 c13 
13goldenspork
it's still really good, writer's block or no. I can't wait for the next chapter... :]
13goldensporkit's still really good, writer's block or no. I can't wait for the next chapter... :]
7/9/2008 c13 2MungojerriesBelle
Wow. Thank you for that update. Don't worry, my friend and I have writer's block too. We share an account on FanFiction. But this one is all my own. And thank you for including me in your note. It makes me happy. Please keep writing.
2MungojerriesBelleWow. Thank you for that update. Don't worry, my friend and I have writer's block too. We share an account on FanFiction. But this one is all my own. And thank you for including me in your note. It makes me happy. Please keep writing.
7/9/2008 c13 superficialSagacity
I feel really bad for Bella. Does Tristan know that Leah likes him? Because she's acting a tad bit obvious...
:D
I feel really bad for Bella. Does Tristan know that Leah likes him? Because she's acting a tad bit obvious...
:D
7/8/2008 c13 JadeDream
i really liked it...jake is a jerk though..but i still love tristan! Update soon!
i really liked it...jake is a jerk though..but i still love tristan! Update soon!
7/8/2008 c13 xbrunnettex0
i love tristan! hopefully she will go to his bands concert and their relationship will idkk continue or something. update soon!
i love tristan! hopefully she will go to his bands concert and their relationship will idkk continue or something. update soon!
7/8/2008 c13 14Fairyworld1217
Great chapter! I love the bickering that Bella and Leah did that was hilarious! And JAKE IS SUCH A JERK.
I just had to point that out... Anyway, great chapter! And update soon!
14Fairyworld1217Great chapter! I love the bickering that Bella and Leah did that was hilarious! And JAKE IS SUCH A JERK.
I just had to point that out... Anyway, great chapter! And update soon!
6/25/2008 c12 Leaving Fictionpress
Congratulations on making it through sophomore year! I enjoyed this chapter, though it seemed like it could've been a bit longer. However, I'll be waiting impatiently for the next.
Couple of comma-y problems, but really your spelling and grammar are quite good. "Chided" seemed like sort of a strange word to use under the circumstances in the third paragraph, but I can't think of anything better.
How long do you think this will be?
Congratulations on making it through sophomore year! I enjoyed this chapter, though it seemed like it could've been a bit longer. However, I'll be waiting impatiently for the next.
Couple of comma-y problems, but really your spelling and grammar are quite good. "Chided" seemed like sort of a strange word to use under the circumstances in the third paragraph, but I can't think of anything better.
How long do you think this will be?