
12/24/2009 c1 fleur de l'est
This is great, very different from the typical young woman voice - yes it complains (quite a lot), but it's actually FUNNY xD I loved it!
This is great, very different from the typical young woman voice - yes it complains (quite a lot), but it's actually FUNNY xD I loved it!
12/8/2009 c1 Icyfire4w5
I love this one-shot for its ultra-modern language. Even though Zephina might sound like a typical teenager, I can tell that you've put lots of effort into characterizing her.
I love this one-shot for its ultra-modern language. Even though Zephina might sound like a typical teenager, I can tell that you've put lots of effort into characterizing her.
6/1/2008 c1 caviar for elephants
I think you should have won. I really love this a lot! I love the Greek mythology names you tied in. You are very brilliant!
I think you should have won. I really love this a lot! I love the Greek mythology names you tied in. You are very brilliant!
1/27/2008 c1
26Melladonna
Oh my God! I'm the first review! I'm honored to be the first one to tell you what I think of this little piece. It definitely made my day! I was having a weird day today for some reason but this made me laugh and put a smile on my face, and for that I commend you.
Even if you didn't win the contest, you did a great job on writing a humorous story nonetheless.

Oh my God! I'm the first review! I'm honored to be the first one to tell you what I think of this little piece. It definitely made my day! I was having a weird day today for some reason but this made me laugh and put a smile on my face, and for that I commend you.
Even if you didn't win the contest, you did a great job on writing a humorous story nonetheless.