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1/31/2008 c1 19Forever In Shadow
The finaly 3 stanzars are by far the best, thought they do not seem to fit the beging so muc, as it seemed like two seporate poems put together.

Other then that i like, it theres some nice images "To drink the poision, to take the sword" being a favort line of mine. SO good refrencing of famouse storys.

And as you already i know i like the last stanzer it ends very bueatifly.

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