for Obsession7/5/2008 c1 
197the Stranger in the moonlight
The tragedy of this poem rings quietly and then louder as it goes on. I liked the simplicity of the rhyming xombined with the complexity of the words.
~the Stranger in the moonlight
197the Stranger in the moonlightThe tragedy of this poem rings quietly and then louder as it goes on. I liked the simplicity of the rhyming xombined with the complexity of the words.
~the Stranger in the moonlight
2/6/2008 c1 3torn pieces
I remembered someone when I saw the name "Chris", anyway, nice poem, deep choice of words and that made the poem more lovely.
3torn piecesI remembered someone when I saw the name "Chris", anyway, nice poem, deep choice of words and that made the poem more lovely.
2/4/2008 c1 1nottoknow
wow
you didn't even read over this did you?
i'm getting the feeling that you just sat down one day and wrote
and that makes the best type of work. not even thinking about it, just writing
i love it, its excellentXD
1nottoknowwow
you didn't even read over this did you?
i'm getting the feeling that you just sat down one day and wrote
and that makes the best type of work. not even thinking about it, just writing
i love it, its excellentXD
1/28/2008 c1 612simpleplan13
the word choice in this is really wonderful..it shows how powerful the obsession is... all the imagery is very powerful and the whole piece is just amazing...
612simpleplan13the word choice in this is really wonderful..it shows how powerful the obsession is... all the imagery is very powerful and the whole piece is just amazing...
1/28/2008 c1 76Kaia Zeffirelli
This is, as always, absolutely amazing! I love it, I can relate to it, it's perfect. Great job! =)
-Katrina
76Kaia ZeffirelliThis is, as always, absolutely amazing! I love it, I can relate to it, it's perfect. Great job! =)
-Katrina
1/28/2008 c1 829Anaare
First of all, many thanks for the review. Greatly appreciated.
I found this an enjoyable poem to read, strongly written. The wording is good and it has keen imagery. I don't believe I've ever heard of "double helix my disease" and it makes for a very interesting image. A good piece of poetry that captures the essence of its title. Well done.
829AnaareFirst of all, many thanks for the review. Greatly appreciated.
I found this an enjoyable poem to read, strongly written. The wording is good and it has keen imagery. I don't believe I've ever heard of "double helix my disease" and it makes for a very interesting image. A good piece of poetry that captures the essence of its title. Well done.