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2/13/2008 c1 9Alteng
I'm doing catch up again.

This is a nice progression from one sin to another. It reminds me of something on the tip of my mind, but i can't place it.

I am really bad at poetry. So I can't say anything constructive.
1/28/2008 c1 2Sophie Stone
Aha, I love this. On one level, it's light, but just beneath it is really quite deep. Only thing: I think you might want to add a comma in line eight.

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