
7/29/2008 c6
1Axdents-Happen
"I groaned, Sir Isaac Newton and the Units of Force."
Nice forshadowing, and insinuation; "With every action, there is an equal and opposite reaction."
Nice.
Though, for some reason, i got the feeling like i read it twice. But, otherwise, I hate you.
lol.
Damn you and your damn good writing skills.

"I groaned, Sir Isaac Newton and the Units of Force."
Nice forshadowing, and insinuation; "With every action, there is an equal and opposite reaction."
Nice.
Though, for some reason, i got the feeling like i read it twice. But, otherwise, I hate you.
lol.
Damn you and your damn good writing skills.
7/25/2008 c6
12XxAntagonistxX
Haha I am SO slow today
I was like "WOAH! HE TRAVELLED BACK IN TIME!"
Good Chapter.

Haha I am SO slow today
I was like "WOAH! HE TRAVELLED BACK IN TIME!"
Good Chapter.
7/10/2008 c5 choc me
That was cute ^_^ ...and Dean is a jerk! The last line here is funny!
Keep writing!
That was cute ^_^ ...and Dean is a jerk! The last line here is funny!
Keep writing!
7/4/2008 c5
1Axdents-Happen
THREE THUMBS UP AND A SHEEP
WHY ARE YOU SO GOOD?
PUUBLLIISSHH!
PUBLLIISSHH!

THREE THUMBS UP AND A SHEEP
WHY ARE YOU SO GOOD?
PUUBLLIISSHH!
PUBLLIISSHH!
6/1/2008 c4 Axdents-Happen
-claps- brava! brava! WRITE THE NEXT ONE! OR I SHALL KILL JACKPOT. lol. remember that? XD AHAHAHA
-claps- brava! brava! WRITE THE NEXT ONE! OR I SHALL KILL JACKPOT. lol. remember that? XD AHAHAHA
4/19/2008 c3 Axdents-Happen
O.o
I hate you and all your awesomeness. Hot damn you have gotten so good.
O.o
I hate you and all your awesomeness. Hot damn you have gotten so good.
4/2/2008 c3 centenarian
oh, nice story. Interesting plot and good writing style. Well, hope you update soon! Keep it up!
oh, nice story. Interesting plot and good writing style. Well, hope you update soon! Keep it up!
2/23/2008 c2
28surrealphobia
Hello again!
Quit being so sarcastic, I thought it was a good first chap! :P It leaves a lot of questions for me to ponder. (Which is great) I seriously was putting together this town in my mind. You have great imagery and enough humor in your story to keep me laughing 24/7. I can't wait to read your second chapter to see what happens to Alex.
Happy Writing,
Surreal

Hello again!
Quit being so sarcastic, I thought it was a good first chap! :P It leaves a lot of questions for me to ponder. (Which is great) I seriously was putting together this town in my mind. You have great imagery and enough humor in your story to keep me laughing 24/7. I can't wait to read your second chapter to see what happens to Alex.
Happy Writing,
Surreal
2/21/2008 c2
1Axdents-Happen
-claps- Bravo! I got sucked into the story. And your writing style has gotten a milioon times better! I can't wait for more!
love, Kathleen~

-claps- Bravo! I got sucked into the story. And your writing style has gotten a milioon times better! I can't wait for more!
love, Kathleen~
2/7/2008 c1
29FallOutLove
aw, i like it!
you have to continue though! you can't leave me with a cliff hanger! :DD
p/s/ Twilight fan! Yes!

aw, i like it!
you have to continue though! you can't leave me with a cliff hanger! :DD
p/s/ Twilight fan! Yes!