
6/26/2010 c4 ConspiracyAnalyst101
I'm not usually a fan of vampires and stuff but this story is awesome :D I like the fact you have more back story to the characters and the little preview thing before the story. It certainly leaves room for readers to wonder and think of reasons for what has happened. Please update soon!
I'm not usually a fan of vampires and stuff but this story is awesome :D I like the fact you have more back story to the characters and the little preview thing before the story. It certainly leaves room for readers to wonder and think of reasons for what has happened. Please update soon!
11/8/2009 c4 Anime Cresent Moon
I love this story - the title is very well picked, it just needs updating lol! I've been checking it for AGES and still no update! lol!
Anyho, the story sounds good so far, it's a shame u didn't win the competition, but what can you do? Lol!
LOVE IT!
ACM x
I love this story - the title is very well picked, it just needs updating lol! I've been checking it for AGES and still no update! lol!
Anyho, the story sounds good so far, it's a shame u didn't win the competition, but what can you do? Lol!
LOVE IT!
ACM x
1/29/2008 c1
89Shadows in the Fire
Pretty good, though it was brain-tickling to read with the italics. Otherwise, it's interesting. BE VERY CAREFUL THOUGH! Vampire stories often become very, very, very cliche. Do something new and interesting with yours!
-Shadow

Pretty good, though it was brain-tickling to read with the italics. Otherwise, it's interesting. BE VERY CAREFUL THOUGH! Vampire stories often become very, very, very cliche. Do something new and interesting with yours!
-Shadow