for Feels Like Home2/10/2008 c5 Delayed Flight
Ok, if Tristan was real I'd be in love with him, he's so sweet! I'm really liking this!
Ok, if Tristan was real I'd be in love with him, he's so sweet! I'm really liking this!
2/10/2008 c5 g
I couldnt imagine a son of mine telling me something like that. I would automatically think "who is this gold digging whore?" Looking forward to the next update.
I couldnt imagine a son of mine telling me something like that. I would automatically think "who is this gold digging whore?" Looking forward to the next update.
2/10/2008 c1 bridgette261
I don't know if you do this purposely but a lot of your characters have similar-sounding names. For instance, Tristan and Trent. And then there's Dustin and Dusty. Maybe if you're going to introduce a lot of characters...try to give them completely different names? Nice first chapter though.
-Katherine
I don't know if you do this purposely but a lot of your characters have similar-sounding names. For instance, Tristan and Trent. And then there's Dustin and Dusty. Maybe if you're going to introduce a lot of characters...try to give them completely different names? Nice first chapter though.
-Katherine
2/8/2008 c4 Jay
Great story so far, keep up the good work and please update really soon
Great story so far, keep up the good work and please update really soon
2/8/2008 c4 Roselee
I LOVE your story i hope you update soon! Keep up the good work
I LOVE your story i hope you update soon! Keep up the good work
2/7/2008 c4 prisonbreakfan
Hey...Really great story...One of the most exciting ones on fictionpress i have to say...Do update on a regular basis! I will definitely be there to read upcoming chapters!
Hey...Really great story...One of the most exciting ones on fictionpress i have to say...Do update on a regular basis! I will definitely be there to read upcoming chapters!
2/7/2008 c4 Neinna
Sorry I'm to lazy to log-in.
But back to you! AMAZING! I was browsing through RockFan's latest read when I found your name and the link. I actually have already read Jayson and Rylan's story, but, hey! I think this one will be just as phenomonal!
Keep up the good work!
Neinna
Sorry I'm to lazy to log-in.
But back to you! AMAZING! I was browsing through RockFan's latest read when I found your name and the link. I actually have already read Jayson and Rylan's story, but, hey! I think this one will be just as phenomonal!
Keep up the good work!
Neinna
2/7/2008 c4 
1Nollie Marie
RockFan made me come and read this and I'M GLAD I DID!
LOVED IT! UPDATE AGAIN SOON!
Huggles
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1Nollie MarieRockFan made me come and read this and I'M GLAD I DID!
LOVED IT! UPDATE AGAIN SOON!
Huggles
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2/7/2008 c4 30RockFan
I am so in love with this story. This chapter was awesome! I cannot WAIT for you to update. And I'm still in love with Tristan. Can I have him?
30RockFanI am so in love with this story. This chapter was awesome! I cannot WAIT for you to update. And I'm still in love with Tristan. Can I have him?
2/7/2008 c3 RockFan
I SO love this story! And they are so cute together! I was expecting them to not have feelings for each other yet but I'm so glad they do! I can't wait to see how they cultivate a relationship while preparing for a baby! Excellent chapter!
I SO love this story! And they are so cute together! I was expecting them to not have feelings for each other yet but I'm so glad they do! I can't wait to see how they cultivate a relationship while preparing for a baby! Excellent chapter!
1/31/2008 c1 RockFan
OMG I didn't want it to end! I was totally disappointed when I got to your A/N (no offense). HURRY and post the next chapter. And I'm glad you put characters from your other story in there.
This is great. Keep going.
OMG I didn't want it to end! I was totally disappointed when I got to your A/N (no offense). HURRY and post the next chapter. And I'm glad you put characters from your other story in there.
This is great. Keep going.